I've been following you for a while now and I have no idea how I missed this picture! Its adorable! Its very sweet and appeals to me because I'm from Hawaii and could actually read that there. X'DDD !!!
Oh okay. I dunno, I don't want to insult you or anything, but I kinda think the black lineart on the circle looks a little out of place with the style you use. I think it would be good to use maybe just a slightly darker color than the skinor something like that. Only a suggestion of something to try of course. <: